[CRISP-TEAM] draft proposal issue: reverse DNS

[Alan Barrett]

On Tue, 16 Dec 2014, Andrei Robachevsky wrote:
>OLD:
>
>The global Internet community also depends upon the IANA operator for
>administration of the special-purpose “IN-ADDR.ARPA” and “IPv6.ARPA” DNS
>zones which is associated with IPv4 and IPv6 number resources
>respectively. It is the understanding of the Regional Internet Registry
>community that the IANA operator administers these zones per request of
>the Internet Architecture Board (“IAB”)3 as “agreed technical work
>items” per the IETF- ICANN IANA MOU.
>
>NEW:
>
>The global Internet community also depends upon the IANA operator for
>administration of the special-purpose “IN-ADDR.ARPA” and “IP6.ARPA” DNS
>zones which is associated with IPv4 and IPv6 number resources
>respectively. These zones are delegated to IANA by the IAB and
>"[s]ub-delegations within this hierarchy are undertaken in accordance
>with the IANA's address allocation practices" (RFC3172). The IANA
>operator administers these zones as “agreed technical work items” per
>the IETF- ICANN IANA MOU. It is important to note that this work is
>outside the scope of the NTIA contract.

"is associated" should be "are associated".

>OLD:
>
>The Internet numbering community proposes that a new contract be
>established between the IANA functions operator and the five Regional
>Internet Registries (RIRs). The contract, essentially an IANA Service
>Level Agreement, would obligate the IANA functions operator to carry out
>those IANA functions relating to the global Internet number pools
>according to policies developed by the regional communities via the
>global Policy Development Process (gPDP).
>
>NEW:
>
>The Internet numbering community proposes that a new contract be
>established between the IANA functions operator and the five Regional
>Internet Registries (RIRs). The contract, essentially an IANA Service
>Level Agreement, would obligate the IANA functions operator to carry out
>those IANA functions relating to the global Internet number pools
>according to policies developed by the regional communities via the
>global Policy Development Process (gPDP) as well as the management of
>the delegations within IN-ADDR.ARPA and IP6.ARPA domains.

That looks good.

--apb (Alan Barrett)