[CRISP-TEAM] Suggested revisions expressed so far

Andrei Robachevsky robachevsky at isoc.org
Tue Dec 16 21:24:47 CET 2014


Thank you very much for agreeing to incorporate the proposed changes.

When working on the IETF response, we were advised that we should answer
the questions of the template point by point.

For instance, in Section IV

·       Description of operational requirements to achieve continuity of
service and possible new service integration throughout the transition.
·       Risks to operational continuity and how they will be addressed.
·       Description of any legal framework requirements in the absence
of the NTIA contract.

all should be answered separately.

Although in the interest of time we may leave it to the second revision.



Michael Abejuela wrote on 16/12/14 20:29:
> Izumi,
> Thank you for providing the recap, I was thinking of asking a last call
> for any further comments as I incorporate revised text into the draft
> proposal.  With regard to those that may be drafting any suggested text
> sections, please feel free to reach out to me directly on any particulars.
>  Otherwise, I will incorporate revisions as commented into the draft
> proposal and circulate to the CRISP team later today (my time EST) so that
> everyone will have it for review before our call tomorrow and we can have
> a productive discussion to finalize our first CRISP team draft.
> Thanks,
> -Michael

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