[CRISP-TEAM] Suggested revisions expressed so far

[Izumi Okutani]

CRISP Team,


Just a recap of suggested revisions expressed on the mailing list so far.

Hope I haven't missed anyone's comments.

Anything else you'd like to add?

It may be a little tight in schedule to reflect it, but I think it would
still be useful to share, if you see anything we should consider.

 * Typo
   - IPv6.ARPA --> IP6.ARPA
 * DNS
   - Suggested text waiting to describe:
     - the mapping between IPv4 or IPv6 addresses and in-addr.arpa or
       ip6.arpa
     - refer to the RFCs: delegation of the sub-domain name space
       should follow the address management heirarchy
       i.e., IANA -- RIRs (or portable assignment holders)
     - Any SLA between the RIRs and the IANA operator should also deal
       with this issue.
 * Overlap
     - Replace with Andrei's suggested text
     - Add Alan's comments:
       The IANA operator should implement what is decided
       (between IETF and RIRs)
 * Ideas from LACNIC
    - Any suggested text?
      (To be confirmed by Andres/anyone from LACNIC region)


Thanks,
Izumi