[CRISP-TEAM] draft proposal: overlaps

[Andrei Robachevsky]

Alan Barrett wrote on 15/12/14 21:43:
> On Fri, 12 Dec 2014, Andrei Robachevsky wrote:
>> The amendment I am proposing has two objectives:
>>
>> - Align the text with the description of the "overlaps" in the IETF
>> response
>> (https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ianaplan-icg-response), and
>> - Emphasize that the overlaps is a matter between the RIRs and the
>> IETF, without any need for a third party (IANA operator will just
>> implement whatever decided), rather than a "star" relationship
>> RIRs-IANA, IETF-IANA.
>>
>> Please let me know what you think
> 
> I agree with your "NEW" text (quoted below), but I'd suggest adding
> something like your above sentence about "The IANA operator should
> implement whatever is decided".
> 

I think we can state this (maybe not as direct as above) in the
paragraph following. For instance:

OLD:

The five open regional RIR communities develop the global policies under
which allocations from the IANA-managed pools are made. The RIRs
facilitate the open, transparent and bottom-up processes via which the
communities develop and agree these policies. There are currently three
global policies relating to management of the global pools of IPv4
addresses, IPv6 addresses and AS Numbers. There is a fourth global
policy agreed by the RIR communities, ICP-2, "Criteria for Establishment
of New Regional Internet Registries".


NEW:

Allocations from these registries delegated to the Internet Number
Registry system are performed by IANA following the global policies,
developed by RIR communities following a global policy development
process [REFERENCE]. This is an open, transparent and bottom-up
processes facilitated by the RIRs. There are currently three global
policies relating to management of the global pools of IPv4 addresses,
IPv6 addresses and AS Numbers. There is a fourth global policy agreed by
the RIR communities, ICP-2, "Criteria for Establishment of New Regional
Internet Registries".

How does this sound?

Andrei